Persuasive+Writing

Because he lets me come down to the cow shed with him, and my dad lets me come and get the cows and calves in with him. He also helps me with my homework and he is always there when I need help. If mum says no to something I ask her, and then I go and ask him and he says yes. If he doesn’t know that mum is no. When mum is not around my dad will give us treats, or say yes to things that mum says no to, unless he asks us if mum said otherwise. He lets not only me but my sisters and I to come down to the shed and watch him and Steve calf a cow, if the cow can’t push the calf out by herself. My dad let’s us play our PS2 if we have been good when mum’s not around. He helps us find good presents for mum for Mother’s day or for her birthday. When we ask him what he would like or what he’s needs for his birthday or for father’s day he gives us tonnes of ideas. My dad shares his lollies and liquorish when he has some. He will help me find things that I may of lost. He will give me kisses and hugs when I need some. My dad will help me solve problems that I have at school, or bullies that I have trouble with. My dad will give Paige and I pocket money when he lets us buy our lunch from the school canteen. When we need something that we don’t even ask him to get for us he goes and gets it for, and comes back with it. If I am bored and I have nothing to do he will give me an idea or ideas of what I can or could do. === __This was written by__ :Elyshia Savage === === === === __Reflection__ : I really liked how I kind of supported my point of view. I don't think I really need to work on anything, apart from I need to make point of views so they make sense. === ===Comment: What a fantastic opinion on how your dad likes to spend time with you and the activties you are able to participate togther in. You are very lucky to have such a cool dad. ===

 **__ Family violence should stop  __**
 * Family violence should stop, because not only are kids getting abused but other family members such as parents are being abused to. Family violence should stop because many family members are getting abused really badly. If you know someone who has is being family abused, what should you do? You should contact a family violence group and sort it out. I really think that family violence should really stop, because not only are children, family members getting hurt on the outside they also getting hurt in the inside to in their hearts. But if you don’t choose to hurt anyone then no one will get hurt. **
 * Some kids, are abused, and some of them remember being abused when they grow up. And some not all of them will abuse one of their family members. And they do it to their children because they didn’t get told that family violence is bad, and that people should never abuse any of their family members or anyone else. **
 * How can you help stop family violence? you can help stop family violence by calling the police first then calling contacting a group that helps stop family violence called. It’s not O.K. Because they can help you stop family violence. Another group that can help you sort out family violence is WA. There are many groups that can help you sort out family violence. If you have seen your friend or family member being abused you can also contact It’s not O.K! Because it defiantly isn’t good to abuse your family members, because it is not o.k. One thing to get you think do you want family violence to stop? Well then if you stop family violence from happening in your house then you could also help stop family violence it in one of your friend’s houses. **
 * This is one way family violence can start, it can start by a family member getting smart to a parent, big sister or a big brother. Family violence is a problem in some country in the world not all. And the parent, brother or sister is really annoyed with the family member who is getting smart to them. If you have seen your friend or family member being abused you can also contact It’s not O.K! Because it defiantly isn’t good to abuse your family members, because it is not o.k. Even if some people say that it is o.k. to abuse a family member. Family violence can also start by Family violence is not the right thing to do, even if you’re just doing it to be cool in front of your friends. So think again, and think is this going to hurt someone. And then hopefully no one will get hurt. So once again I think family violence should really stop.  **
 * Family violence can be caused by a male or a female. To stop family violence from happening, you can if you are felling like hurting one of your family members. Stop and work out will I cause myself to get into trouble and will the police put me in jail if I abuse one of my family members? And you should also think will I be able to stop myself from hurting someone. When you are thinking about hurting one of your family members you can also think will I be able to stop myself from hurting the family member that I choose to hurt?   **
 * If you do get into a situation to do with hurting one of your family members what would you do? Would you stop and think or hurt the family member? I really think family violence should stop because it is sad to hear a story in the newspaper or in a magazine about someone who was abused by one of there family members. **


=== __Comment:__ Good basis. Maybe just add that not all abuse is alcohol related. And what other agencies or places people can seek help or information. Great statement againist violence though. ===